Cut out all these exclamation points. An exclamation point is like laughing at your own joke.
The joy of songwriting only gets messed up if you are trying to follow up a big success, or you are trying to create a hit single, or if you have conscious thoughts of a particular outcome for the music.
I think it was Freud who said that we're all arrested at a certain age. For me, it was always 13.

